Pilbeam 2 .....

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Taking on board the comments from my first Pilbeam pic, I have made some mods to this one. I dont think that this is such a striking image from the off, but I am still pleased with it and look forward to your comments
Pete




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I much prefer the work on your first attempt. your first version had more feel to it. At least the red numerals have gone. Nice photo.
Cheers.