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Old 24-06-2008, 06:56
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Can someone critique this for me please?
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As an artistic shot I cannot crit it. It has a pure moment feel to it. There is no colour to detract, nor any crisp detail to take your eye away from the image subject. The blur and the soft look force yo to accept the image for what it is. As an artistic image I really like it. The crop is excellent and the conversion good.

From a technical and nit picky, 'non-artistic' point. There is camera shake, nothing is pin sharp. No detail in the eyes. Some consider this essential when shooting portraits of children. Areas of the finger and the towel are blown out and the hair in the middle of the forehead is kind of sharp and a bit distracting.

Two rivers of thought/opinion.

My heart says to ignore the technical side. The picture lends itself more to an artistic/feeling image rather than a recovery pic.The look you have could well have been intentional. I choose the artistic view because I do not want to dislike it because of technical details. I want to view it because I simply like it. To me its a good image.

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Hey Sy

crits? sure

candid grab looks excellent to me. full of emotion, great feel to it. love the motion. looks good to me..

sorry i havent given you an essay like Teeseeoh but he doesnt have many friends so he tries blanket the forum with his viking mug..
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Thanks guys, lemme see what kind of mess I can make with the next one.... Cheers.
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sorry i havent given you an essay like Teeseeoh but he doesnt have many friends so he tries blanket the forum with his viking mug..

I heard that donkey boy!!!
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