Shot of my mates Daughter.

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Brought a Nikon D3 today, just playing around taking photos of my mates kids.
They loved the one with all three of them.




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Skin tones look underexposed buddy to be honest. there is no lift between subject and background. You can rectify in P/shop.

Andy Eos1nrs aka donkey boy could give you some pointers. full time studio tog an all..

They just look a little flat to me and need punch and contrast. The expressions and poses are fine and good...just need some 'oooomph'

See what you mean, I have printed an A4 size of this and it looks fine printed, will have a play around in PS and print another. Thanks for stopping to take a look and commenting, very much appreciated.
All the best
Paul

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under a minute mate...levels/contrast, it needs work but it gives a rough idea bud.

Lovely girl and great capture.

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Thanks mate, will have a play around.
all the best
Paul

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The girl has incredible eyes mate. i know you can pull the best out of the image.... may the force be with you

Great shot, she is very photogenic and blonde hair is always a winner on little girls, see plenty of them coming through the studio...show the mums a quick preview on the back of the camera and they always go weak at the knees!!
D3 eh??nicely done, havent got the boss round my finger yet, but i will. from my shoots last week we did a shade under £10k over 6 viewings..reckon i'm loreal?? sorry worth it? lol
only thing i find off-putting from the two shots is the earring on the youngest boy...other than that, fabulous shots of great looking kids. nice work, now get the money rolling in to pay for the D3

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Told the missus she cant have an holiday yet lol!!!

Have you told her you have the camera yet?

If so does she know how much??

Can you tell i have been here lol!

All been said about the shots!!

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LoL, already booked mate going to Canada in September, looking to buy a house.

I had to she signed for it when it arrived special delivery..

Yes, and she wasn't impressed, I said that I had a good week at work and I wouldn't spend so much on my car this year

Yes.. Lol. So when you getting yours then?

Thanks for stopping to take a look and commenting, very much appreciated.
All the best
Paul

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Ever notice that anyone going slower than you is an idiot, but anyone going faster is a maniac!!

I have been busy doing portraits of kids,and ge