William_Craig_Gordon

**Eos1nrs** · #1 (**permalink**) 09-06-2008, 19:05

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For those who dont know me, my son william was born 8 weeks early and since then, i have shared his progress from time to time.
He is now 6 months old, and yes i am one of those annoying parents, but i really DO think he is good looking. takes after me of course!

My Son Born today 20th Nov 2007
William Craig Gordon aged 11 weeks

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**Dennyboy** · #2 (**permalink**) 09-06-2008, 19:10

Cant Crit mate the perfect baby shot, happy smiling cant fault.....love it. I was premature had a serious op (kidney removal) as soon as i was born and i am 18stone now!! He will be fine, lovely family shot one for a frame if it was me.

5 smiler

**Mello** · #3 (**permalink**) 09-06-2008, 19:56

Very nice mate...

(i can hear you smiling from here!!!) and so you should,got your eyes i reckon but probably doesn't drool as much...

Pete E · #4 (**permalink**) 09-06-2008, 20:01

dam cute little fellow - every reason to be proud .....

Hippy-Di · #5 (**permalink**) 09-06-2008, 20:27

What a happy gorgeous baby he is too...and looks like he already has your sense of humour

No wonder you are so proud!!!!

Great shot too....shots like this are always fun to look back on....long after his favorite toy is thrown away you will remember it as clear as day! I know I do with mine

(They are 15 and 12 now).....

Len · #6 (**permalink**) 09-06-2008, 20:51

What a Happy Chappie

fayswon · #7 (**permalink**) 09-06-2008, 23:01

beautiful skin, beautiful eyes. Actually, i don't find the parents all that annoying; it's the GRANDPARENTS.....lol

My husband was born premature, at home, on the farm and dad was in the back '40'. Grandma sent his 3 little brothers to go get dad. They went alright but forgot where they were supposed to be going when they came across a little patch of field flowers. They came into the bedroom, their palms sweaty, with holding wilting posies and were so bewildered when mom started hollering at them. He was taken to church in a shoebox...the good old days.

whatt · #8 (**permalink**) 10-06-2008, 02:16

Hi Andy .. what a handsome little one William is ... and love that happy smile .. with not a tooth in sight yet ...lol .. love how you have captured the eyes .. so very clear and sharp .. a little face that you would love to smooch .. lol ... Thanks for sharing ... and Fay ..... GRANDPARENTS .. ARE NOT .. NOT ANNOYING .. .. hahahahahah
Cheers
Else

cleano · #9 (**permalink**) 10-06-2008, 21:12

Where the future is begin!

My poor English is not enough to express my feeling about this photo, but you caught the moment perfectly my friend!

PS: goes to my favorites my friend

Regard
cleano

Tco · #10 (**permalink**) 11-06-2008, 00:13

Mini donkey dude!!!!!!
How ya doing!!!????

Mate why the hell you have asked for serious crit is beyond me. Images like these are beyond all that. These are important and priceless images that speak volumes. Its great to see the little dude smile!!!

Nice one bud

Your internet weirdo chum...Tco