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Old 24-05-2008, 01:06 PM
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Fantastic pose!
It almost looks like she is humouring you with her patience mate.Conversion works really well. Hint of Bailey in there too.

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I love the top half, it has very good eye contact, and nice tonal variations. But her legs, and particularly her right foot seem to have too much light on them. My eye keeps being drawn to the bottom half. What lighting did you use? Don't think it needed to be censored.
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Nice pose and very engaging,but i also find the foot a bit bright and distracting...
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hey newbloke
great shot but i too find the front foot too bright
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Hi Andy,
she does look very much at ease with you as the tog. The lighting on the lower half of the body has already been mentioned, but is that an unoverlooked slip with the clone tool just below her arm and between her knees I see?
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Wow Phil! Eagle eyed or what!!!

Makes me wonder just exactly how long you have been looking at this young lady!!!! ?????

She is gorgeous!.
Andy i am so jealous mate. You have worked with some real beauts.
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Thanks for comments guys, well spotted on the slip Phil, - I may stick some more from this shoot up - she was a very good model and great to work with.
I do agree bottom half is badly lit, I will see if I can tome it down a bit with old photoshop.
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