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Old 09-05-2008, 09:18 PM
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Hi Len

only two things i would change
1. put the groom on the brides RHS. |To avoid smacking said bride with his sword (olden days when men drew their swords it was assumed they were right handed)
2. careful about low viewpoints..looks up peoples noses!

nice bw conv, touch deep for me but crop is good.. nice work
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Cheers Andy

This shot was taken exactly how the pro tog took it except for the low view point
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