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Old 26-03-2008, 22:02
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cool shot, lovely relaxed family and something unique for them to hang on the wall. nice one. i'll leave it up to the others to add critique, looks fine to me
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cool shot, lovely relaxed family and something unique for them to hang on the wall. nice one. i'll leave it up to the others to add critique, looks fine to me
This is perfect critique Lisa, Thank you. Not because you like it but you read into the shot and thought like a client...Cheers!
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Hi Andy, like this sort of stuff, cant really critique it as i just LIKE it!
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I like your creativity. A little bit of action, some great expressions. The kids running in profile shows their height in relationship to the others for that time in thier life..makes a great keepsake for the family.
I also love the bare feet idea...so natural and ties all the people together as one unit.
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brill & fun
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Now this one i do like!!!

Great idea,sort of makes me think like mum's fed up that the kids always seem to bypass dad to go straight to her (as i suspect all mum's do at some point??)

Hope i have'nt offended with the other comments??? but can't help that i like two of them and are not so keen on the other two.
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Hope i have'nt offended with the other comments???
nope. got thick skin mate..when i do a great shoot and they take the freebie that knocks you down a peg or three. but when they spend in four figures, that helps you realise everyone has different tastes..
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This is awesome mate, cannot crit this - knowing what my own clients like I can see why you are making more money than me! well done may friend - top shot!
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Hi Andy .. Really like all of your portraits .. none of them are stiff and boring like most portraits are. You really can see how much fun that they are having .. and what a terrific image to have when the children are all grown up. .. To look back and see them as they were .. Thanks for sharing ..
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