Tash and Craig

Photographers Comments
Not the sort of stuff I do every day but judging from the responses of the model shoots I thought I would throw this one into the pot...feel free to slate or rate!




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Hi Andy,
the lighting is good and even the hot spots on the shiny skin adds to the effect. Good tones and crop with excellent eye contact. My only slight crit, is that I wished we could see the whole of Tash's face and it wasn't obscured by Craigs shoulder and her own fingers. Other than that, very natural and very nice.

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Regards....Phil

If it moves shoot it. If it doesn't move, still shoot it.

Thanks Phil,
I purposely posed Tash that way as I wanted her to appear submissive and a little bit shy whilst Craig was very confident and forthright. I wanted to try and create an impression rather than a basic portrait. perhaps it did not come over that way. It is so difficult sometimes to see images how other people do - I did quite a lot of work with this pair and so know them quite well so nowI know their personalities too well which is not always a good thing. Thanks for the comments - well appreciated.