Leaflet pic

fayswon · #11 (**permalink**) 07-03-2008, 20:53

I really like the clothing!!..okay, so you look like the boy next door (squeeze cheeks). You look SO approachable and like someone that I wouldn't have to worry about being comfortable with...that is, if this is for portraiture (if not, ignore me) I have only met offish portrait photographers and after leaving their presence, is like running out of a dentist chair. If the expression is borderline, let us see another one (you are certainly good viewing). I like the cap, relaxed manner and positioning of the camera, though the elbow seems thickish (what do you mean, you didn't notice the hand?...lol)
So, can I be cheeky now?...either one likes to be pinched.

Tco · #12 (**permalink**) 07-03-2008, 21:08

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Originally Posted by Ogofmole

Not that I'm any expert in trying to promote a business but reading the comments above and then looking at your image again, I also think that a bright white background would be more suited and differently do something with that arm. plus your text needs to be more stronger.

Point taken mate. I accept the white background comments. I just see so many of them I kinda got sick of them. I think I said this in an earlier post. I will do something with the arm in the next shot as well as the text. Cheers Barry.

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Originally Posted by Hippy-Di

Hi yet another Andrew.........nice to see a smile at last

I agree about the slight change in facial expression that Andy (half pint) mentioned, less of the Puppy dog look.....cute as that is lol. Perhaps you could lose the spot light and crop in further, that way you will be using more of the small available space and the camera says it all! It definately needs a bolder font to balance out the rest of the black in the image.

Just my rambling thoughts.
Diane

I'll smother myself in peanut butter and pose naked with a giant squid attached to my loins whilst yodelling yankee doodle dandy...seriously though Di...ta for the comments. They will be in the forefront of my mind when re-shooting.

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Originally Posted by Newbloke

Poor bloke is going to need therapy after this..... Can I also suggest if you are going to reshoot this, that you go with even lighting - the shadow thing can look a bit sinister - when you are trying to attract portrait clients especially a good, clear, honest look is important - so white background, even lighting, confident pose and try and get someone else to take it instead of the self timer (am I right?) - get them to cajoule a natural look out of you. . ...I think old half pint is going to regret me being introduced on here now his nickname is out!!

Therapy? mate I did 3 years at her majesty's service...i'm 6ft 4 and weigh in at a friendly 16 stone, maybe that explains the sinister thing (wink wink).
You were bang on concerning the self timer...how the hell you knew that is beyond me.

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Originally Posted by fayswon

I really like the clothing!!..okay, so you look like the boy next door (squeeze cheeks). You look SO approachable and like someone that I wouldn't have to worry about being comfortable with...that is, if this is for portraiture (if not, ignore me) I have only met offish portrait photographers and after leaving their presence, is like running out of a dentist chair. If the expression is borderline, let us see another one (you are certainly good viewing). I like the cap, relaxed manner and positioning of the camera, though the elbow seems thickish (what do you mean, you didn't notice the hand?...lol)
So, can I be cheeky now?...either one likes to be pinched.

I like to be pinched. Fay thanks for the comments.

I'm gonna ditch this one and re-shoot for sure.

I hate shooting myself...its not easy as many of you can appreciate. Its far easier shooting other folk. I am sincerely grateful for the input guys...you know I mean this and I love you all. Back to the drawing board.
Cheers and God bless....
Tco

Joseph Carmichael · #13 (**permalink**) 08-03-2008, 11:08

Hi there Tco,

Well first up it's nice to get a face to Tco.........And I like what you've done. Nice and clean, and I like the grey background....a very good choice for printed material. Have to disagree with Phil tho (sorry) as I think that the font is just fine.

Shooting a picture of yourself, for your circular is a top idea.
I'm all for it.
The look....that's my problem, can't quite put my finger on it.
Not too bad, but just not quite right all at the same time.
Too puppy dog or a little too checky, but at the same time I wouldn't throw it away either.
If I were you......I would shoot a series of shots, all with the same grey background and cut the one of your choice and add it in to the final.
Oh! ahh! by the way I'll get you that tutoral on cut outs, especially hair cut outs, I just forgot to bring it with me.

Good luck with it Tco

**Mello** · #14 (**permalink**) 08-03-2008, 11:11

DE DE DE DE,DE DE DE DE.... WAHEY Chevy chase is alive and well and taking photo's in cornwall Lol

Don't know anything about studio work? but as with the others i think the font is wrong and i don't like it overlapping the image.
Other than that i like it but then again what do i know????

Am doing my first proper shoot tomorrow so when i post some pics you can give me some grief (sorry helpful pointers)

PS: have got a thread going in the tecniques forum if you care to comment it would be grately appreciated....

**Eos1nrs** · #15 (**permalink**) 08-03-2008, 11:52

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Originally Posted by Mello

DE DE DE DE,DE DE DE DE.... WAHEY Chevy chase is alive and well and taking photo's in cornwall Lol

oh man yes! thats who is !!! hahahahaha

Tco · #16 (**permalink**) 08-03-2008, 12:31

Chevy Chase!?
Rather that than Shrek I suppose.
I may lose the signature thing all together mate. The missus says it is a bit cheesey.

I thought you may pick up on that one half donkey pint boy

**Paul** · #17 (**permalink**) 08-03-2008, 20:56

I've been looking at this image for ages so here are my comments. As most people have already said that sig doesn't look right and not a good choice of font type. It really works against what you are trying to achieve!

Regarding your right side in shadow, I feel this needs to be a little more even as already commented on and I'm not 100% on the Chevy Case baseball hat. Sorry, had to make a reference

But saying the above, and coming from a corporate background with the little modifications made your image would tell me that you had a welcoming fresh image, your work would be modern and contemporary and above everything else you give me the vital first impression of someone that looks professional and can be trusted.

Tco · #18 (**permalink**) 08-03-2008, 22:32

Thanks Paul. I am pretty convinced i'm gonna ditch it mate and try another approach. I'm all up for the naked thing but the wife says that i'd be bankrupt within a week!

Thanks for taking time to comment mate.

Jay Pat · #19 (**permalink**) 09-03-2008, 01:29

I think this is a great shot for what you described that you are looking for. The equipment there is simple for the shot and shows what you do. Your outfit comes across to as casual and comfortable. You facial expression is friendly, warm, fun to be with and confident. Someone that will be pleasant to work with. I think it is a great "magnet" image. I hope you do well with your project. Thanks for allowing me to speak freely!...Pat

Tco · #20 (**permalink**) 09-03-2008, 08:29

Cheers Pat...of course this is not the real me mate

Have a look through my gallery and you'll see captain viking and grumpy old sod...this is the real me

There is a link to every members gallery in the top right of every post they do under the join date. Be warned though my friend...I m a bit weird.

Many thanks for the comments