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Old 21-02-2008, 10:53 PM
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after setting up the shot with camera on tripod, 40s shutter f.8. i ran a wind-up led torchlight/flashlight up and down and across h, my models body.
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Hi philippa, I like this image, composition is good and lighting has worked well. Must have been very hard to stay still for 40 seconds.
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thank you Barry, 'h' was an exemplary model. glad you like it.
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Top marks for the effort here and also for the finished result!
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Great intuition for the lighting technique here - well done you
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It's a very good shot, but it would have been much better without the towel. The lighting is very good, and I love the texture of the floorboards, the tattoos, the composition, but the towel looks indistinct and spoils the body-line. Might have been better if he wore jockey shorts a la Beckham! Or, you could have done a nude, but I guess this site doesn't allow them. A good shot though. I should imagine there are quite a few females on this site who would like to know how you get hunky males into your bathroom and run a torch up and down them - perhaps you had better tell them?
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Or, you could have done a nude, but I guess this site doesn't allow them.
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