Photo Critique - Mom and daughter

Mausue · #1 (**permalink**) 19-06-2009, 13:29

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My daughter and grandaughter

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**Ogofmole** · #2 (**permalink**) 19-06-2009, 15:42

I like the composition having the grandaughter as main subject and daughter in background, plus the monochrome seems to have brought out detail in the grandaughter's face, only two small crits, one is the grandaughter's chin just cut off, and second I would had worked on the eyes a bit to get some detail between Iris and Puple. But still a nice shot.

Mausue · #3 (**permalink**) 21-06-2009, 07:43

Thanks for the feedback Barry much appreciated

**Tco** · #4 (**permalink**) 21-06-2009, 08:30

What an amazing face!
I love the way you have placed them and your use of DOF. I can still tell your daughter is gorgeous though

I would agree with Barry on the chin crop but otherwise I totally love. this.
Fantastic expression

Mausue · #5 (**permalink**) 21-06-2009, 13:56

Thanks very much Andy. A rooky like me really appreciates the feedback of a pro like you

xerviar · #6 (**permalink**) 26-08-2009, 09:51

Am sure this pix will sell a product...Nice shot. Pls kindly tell me how u edited it in Photoshop. Was there anything special u did to the original shot

Mausue · #7 (**permalink**) 26-08-2009, 10:50

Hi Xerv thank you, pleased you like it. I didn't do much in Photoshop apart from convert to B&W and increase contrast slightly

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