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Old 05-06-2008, 15:20
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First try at Macro, caught this beatle eating my lillies




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Hi Trev, nice shot but looks a tad blurry, i can see from exif it was quite a low shutter speed and a high f no (14) did you hand hold? i have found using a tripod even though its a faff increased my hit rate also using manual focus at smaller distances helps.

I may have either reduced the f no to f7 say or upped the iso to 400 to give a faster shutter. Good first try, i am hooked on small things myself since last week when i got my extension tubes. It is trial and error with settings but good first go mate look forward to some more from you.
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Hi Trevor, agree with Dennis on this one as far as camera settings go. This looked as if it could have been a really nice image as that beetle had some really nice colour on it with those black legs. But as you say this is a first attempt and you have done well to capture it.
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Yep its a Lilly beetle, and they go by their name, eating every lilly in their path, glad to see you are going macro Trev, i echo what the lads said above, re the settings, but if you dont want to use a tripod, try a beanbag, easily made with a bag and dried peas or similar.
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Thanks for the comments Dennis,Barry, Bev.Taken in all the comments and keeping on trying.
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