Blue - Bluebell

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Isolated Bluebell




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Hi Trevor nice close up on the bluebells but the image looks a little flat and think a tighter crop would put more focus on those lovely flowers.

You have the edit box ticked as yes so had a go hope you don't mind. Feel free to say if it's not to your taste.

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Happiness is when you look in the mirror and like the person looking back

i think its a little flat, maybe add some fill flash , it would help if it was if more light was falling it, possibly improve the contrast in post processing

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Thanks for the comments, Maureen, Yes the tighter crop does look better thanks for the suggestion.

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Trevor

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