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10-05-2008, 11:41 AM
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North Yorkshire, England
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Teasle Head
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Shot of last years Teasle Head
Serious Critique Required: The photographer has requested he/she would like a more serious level of critique for this image to obtain more constructive critiscism from other members. Please make sure the comments you leave are indeed constructive and aim to help the photographer see the image from a different perspective and/or provide help and guidance to how the image can be improved.
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15-05-2008, 04:02 PM
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My real name is: Maureen
Tipton, England
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Like your close up of the Teasel head. It looks a little soft at the top and could perhaps do with a bit of sharpening and a levels adjustment to bring it out more. The border is also a little overpowering and a more subtle white one might make your image pop out more 
I did have a go at editing but decided not to post it.
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17-05-2008, 12:55 PM
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Thanks for the suggestions Maureen, will have a look at them.
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17-05-2008, 01:09 PM
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My real name is: Andy aka Brad Pitt
Southampton, England
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Great shot Trevor
punchy, crisp and the BG works well. i agree the border is quite powerful but i am also guilty of said style! nice work!
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17-05-2008, 01:33 PM
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Thanks for the comments Andy.
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17-05-2008, 02:18 PM
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My real name is: Merv
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Hi Trevor,
sometimes if a border looks too strong I use the colour picker to select a colour from the photo itself.
Also I don't know how you did the border but there is a little bit poking out underneath it, probably the easiest way to do a border is to increase the canvas size, that way you don't have to mess about lining stuff up to fit, do it by pixels or measurements (i.e. not percentage) to get a uniform border.
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17-05-2008, 03:14 PM
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Thanks Merv, yes I see what you mean about the color of the border.
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