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Old 07-05-2008, 03:22 AM
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for the light source I used a large flashlight with a coffee filter over it ..
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Theme: Technology
Light: Other Light Source (Non flash or Natural)
Focal Distance: 24mm-70mm
Location: Indoors
Colour Type: Colour
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Hi Else, Just spotted your PP for Technology, and you have chosen a excellent subject (could have been improved by using a Nikon ). I like your dark background and at first I thought it needed cropping, but no it has more impact as you have got it. Lighting was nice, soft and even. As for colour, well you can see a blue strap and coloured letters on the camera so I think that you have got away with it. Good project and good image.
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Hi Barry .. my apologies for not seeing this comment .. I have just found out how to check .. to see if there are any new comments .. lol . taken me all this time to figure it out ... duh .. Thank you for your visit and comments.. and I would have had to borrow . .a Nikon from my son ... lol ..
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