[PP] Technology B&W

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First entry in the PP feature, more difficult than i thought but made me think!!




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This image was specifically created for a Personal Project created by our project randomiser. This photo was created using the following randomly chosen criteria:

Theme: Technology
Light: Natural Light
Focal Distance: 70-105mm
Location: Indoors
Colour Type: Colour

Nice first PP mate.

I know this might sound a bit anal (oo errr) but would have liked it straight.And i would of focused right on the front so it would have dropped off as you look further into the pic but maybe that's just me.....

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I like the angle Dennis makes the shot more interesting. Nice first pp

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Thanks Steve and Maureen

Due to the focal length (105mm)i had to shoot at, i think it is straight however due to the perspective it appears to be off centre. Its all subjective but i wanted the centre of the subject (the numbers) in focus, however take your points on board!

Shot it at higher Apertures as well but didnt look right when all in focus.

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Hi Dennis,
I like this picture, the depth of field makes it look
great. Im not to sure about the background colour tho?