Happy Easter

Swisschef216 · #1 (**permalink**) 22-03-2008, 01:45

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Playing with light

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Norlynks · #2 (**permalink**) 22-03-2008, 07:41

Hi Hans love your lighting on your flower but your back ground detracts from the subject.

(Norman Nikon Man)

ukhero · #3 (**permalink**) 22-03-2008, 07:43

Nice image but for me the lighting and framing are a little out. First it needs to be framed more to the right and if its the whole flower we are being shown needs to have a looser crop if how ever you want us to see the stamen then I feel it needs to be a little tighter. My comment on the light is the big dark area bottom right of frame but this would have been removed with re cropping and or re framing.

All in all Nice image but a little more attention to the detail would have made this a winner in my book.