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Old 22-03-2008, 01:44
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A busy Bee making Arizona Oranges in my back yard




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You did well to get this little chap at work. Nice and sharp and bee also nice and sharp with good detail. Again I have a little problem with the crop on this I would sugest a little tighter to loose some more of the top of the green part of the stamen so it looks like it was removed on purpose and highlights the bee more or if this has already been cropped then open it back up a little to include all of the stamen..

All in all very good pic just the framing for me again...
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