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The weathers been bad so more time spent in the studio.. i took this one yesterday water drops added with a dropper




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This is very nice - I like the subtlety and tone. good depth of field and an interesting crop - the only thing I could pick out is the bent leaf on the left which draws your eye away from the drops a bit, but really great image. nice one!
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thanks andy! good point about that leaf i wasnt sure about it.. ill pluck it and do another one
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It is beautiful. But why such a narrow crop? I think it would be nice to see the centre of the flower (or more of it).

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It is beautiful. But why such a narrow crop? I think it would be nice to see the centre of the flower (or more of it).

phil i was just trying different crops ... will upload some of the other shots
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