composition critique..Please

You guys have made this into a fun/learning thread. Reading, my thought was,"O..a dallop of icecream, may keep the eyes coming back..vanilla, being a light color which draws the eyes.

Straw, good idea. Reminds me of the time I took a picture of a bear 'dump' that was left on my front doorstep. (it was more than obvious that he has spent the night in the neigbors plum tree). The subject was humungous; looked like it could have come from a dinasour and to give it the effect of steamed plum pudding, I poured boiling water on top (it was a very cold, dewy morning).

About the licking problem. Many years ago when I was cook in a logging camp a young lass had a very peculiar habit which she kept under wraps but she did confide in me. She found herself licking anything that was dusty (you heard right). Not long after she discovered that she was pregnant and was a little stymied as to how that came about. I told her it was from all that licking. Later, I was to find out that graving for dirt does happen because of some deficency.

Nik..be sure to dust your monitor frequently...one can never be too careful.