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Old 31-07-2008, 03:41 PM
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Well trying again ..home from a short trip to visit with gandson and his wife ... Hope this works this time .. and I do everything right .. yikes ... as said before think I have met all the criteria
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Old 31-07-2008, 08:09 PM
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Very good, for your PP, with the subject of Light and taken in Natural light, Indoors. You did not choose a easy subject and I can't really think of anything much better than what you have done here. Although you could have tried it with the light off, so that you were only using Natural light, but the effect would not be as good. I do light your monochrome effect.
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Hi Barry .. Thank you for your comments and visit .. guess at times I can get a bit thick .. so to speak .. must of been a real blonde moment .. and yes I should have used another photo that I had taken .. not of the light but the light from outside coming through the blinds .. duh .. lol ..
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Photography the process and art of recording pictures by means of capturing light.
I like the concept of the image and wouldn't like to attemt it my self Barry is right it is a difficult subject.
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Hi Mark .. Thank you for stopping by and commenting .. and after I had read Barry's comments .. the light went on .. lol .. that the light should have been off .. lol .. these PPs can really tax the brain and for some of them . you really need to put on your thinking cap.
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