Yellow Drops

Colin L. · #1 (**permalink**) 29-06-2008, 01:12 AM

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Just a cloe up of a wet yellow flower

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**Dennyboy** · #2 (**permalink**) 29-06-2008, 11:05 AM

Colin, here goes, my first thoughts are its blurred and would look better with a very small border to hold the flower in the frame if that makes sense. It is also a bit flat. Being constructive if possible put the camera on a tripod, cant see what shutter speed you used as no EXIF. either you have camera blur from a slow shutter speed and the camera moved. Or the flower moved in the wind. If you meant it blurry i apologise!

cyclone · #3 (**permalink**) 29-06-2008, 05:07 PM

I agree with Dennis, although I think it looks more just out of focus than blur.
I wonder how close you were to the flower, maybe it was a little closer than the minimum focus distance of the lens? Again as Dennis said, with the EXIF data we would have a better idea.