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Old 27-06-2008, 03:18 PM
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Dedicate this one to TCO - hope he likes.... hope you all like... LOL

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Old 27-06-2008, 03:40 PM
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Superb landscape. Nice foreground, movement on the water and detail in the mountains. I like the way that the row of rocks lead your eye onto that island. Only one very small crit and that is that I would have cloned out that aircraft vaper trial on top right hand of image.
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Nice shot (as always)
Colours are good, love the warm tones in the FG. nice detail in the rocks...is it me or is it on the slant, dipping to the right?
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Here you go, removed the vapour trail and straightened image a little - does this work?
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Here you go, removed the vapour trail and straightened image a little - does this work?
Excellent Image now 10/10
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Great shot, and improved with the edit.
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Mark looked at the big version, nice one as usual you are our Pano expert that is for sure.!
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Mark looked at the big version, nice one as usual you are our Pano expert that is for sure.!
I not THAT good mate.....!!!!! Paul is giving some great panos too!!!

But glad you like nonetheless, fella going to repost larger image with new edited version
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Hi hun, WOW, that's beautiful Gona leave it at that and sit back and dream of dipping my toes lol
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