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Old 26-06-2008, 03:23 PM
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Took this one last year on a slow shutter speed. Finally dug it out and did some hdr, levels and cloning on it.




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Good shot:Getting very clever.

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Yus mate I did - lol not notice until later this afternoon - am going to try be there on at least one of those days. Will let you know which.
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Hi Mark, I like the effect on the water and rocks, very silky. But I find the greens a bit to strong/bright.
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I like this kind of picture. There will be a day when I get to work one as good as this.
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Hiyas Barry!

Does this look any better - on hind site I agree with you about the greens being to bright
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I like this kind of picture. There will be a day when I get to work one as good as this.
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Cheers mate! Your HDR work is coming on great at the moment - keep it going! Love the road n flyin saucers image!
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Does this look any better - on hind site I agree with you about the greens being to bright
I prefer the look of this one. And I'm sure it looks a lot better viewing at a larger size.
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Like the edited one Mark, found the greens to bright, often happens that with HDR
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Echo the above comments buddy. Stunning image just a wee bit strong in the green. Done anymore panoramics? ( I love those)
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