HDR attemp of a nice day

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This is a shot in the west deserts of Utah,




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this is just so wiiiiiide open!!
great shot. only thing i would say is the sky doesnt seem to flow from top to the horizon. clouds seem a touched cooked and the band of high blue in the middle seems to be a sudden change from the top and lower thirds of the sky. composition is good though and i love big open skies

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It is indeed a seriously wide open space and very impressive for that

To my eyes though it is just a little too empty and some small item is needed just to give it some scale and to hang the whole scene around. I’m thinking of, say, a post with a sign on it about 30m into the shot at approximately a third in from the left. But it could be anything really ….. an old tree stump, a rusting & abandoned vehicle, a big rock.

Good shot, Dave B

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