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Old 12-06-2008, 11:14 PM
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How on earth did you manage to get up there, Len? Did someone leave a ladder lying about or something? LOL
Seriously tho, great lead in lines, but think I would liked to have seen the tracks more central to the image. Still like the capture, mate

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Good Question that, Len the mountain goat, if you shot it central it would have run off to the left as you look at it, if you had shot it portrait though it would have been dead centre
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I agree with the comments about shooting in portrait, as Mark said how did you get so high there.
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Hi Guys; I will solve the mystery the shot is taken from a road bridge that crosses the viaduct..

I had thought about a portrait shot be i wouldn't have got the houses in at the side to give the perspective of the height.

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Solve another riddle, mate. How u get to the road that crosses? Debs knows that area fairly well but didn't know about that road!!
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Hi Mark

If you leave Yarm High Street cross the bridge over the river and take the first left towards Aislaby you have to cross over the railway. Any wiser now????
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