Yarm Viaduct

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Railway Viaduct spanning the river Tees at Yarm




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Fantastic shot, love the varying ripples upon the water. Could I make the small suggestion of cropping the left a little to the centre of the tree that side, leaving just the three arches on the left visible and giving a matching 'greenery' edging to that side to mirror the right? Might be just me, I'm no expert, but that works better to my eye when I obscure that far edge.

This is true steve, just put my thumb over it and it works

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damn..tried steve's idea and lo and behold got me a dirty screen!!! lol

cracking shot Len

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lol, sorry mate, got some wipes here if you need 'em?

Is that better

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Hi Len .. it is a gem .. and love the crop ... Thanks for sharing ..
Cheers
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Hi Len yea a really nice shot, also works much better with the crop.

Thanks for all the comments and advice

Drawn by this fine old Bridge ... sure is a classic.