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Len · #1 (**permalink**) 04-06-2008, 23:10

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I want to be a swan

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**Dennyboy** · #2 (**permalink**) 05-06-2008, 06:58

Hi Len, looking at the EXIF you were struggling for light with this one, 800ASA, 200mm focal and only 1/80 shutter speed. Still a nice shot but slightly blurry on my monitor i would maybe have dropped the aperture to say f6-9 to get more shutter speed, ten you would have had less noise and a sharper image. Nice one anyway mate.

Len · #3 (**permalink**) 05-06-2008, 10:13

Hi Dennis

Thanks for looking and comments; points noted.

Derek Franklin · #4 (**permalink**) 05-06-2008, 10:45

Hi Len, I like your work but I have to agree with Dennis on this one. it looks a little fuzzy but that could be down to your shutter speed and been hand held???. What I will say tho is I like the colours, well done mate keep them coming.

Len · #5 (**permalink**) 05-06-2008, 20:36

Thanks Derek