This Ole House 3

Len · #1 (**permalink**) 01-06-2008, 21:47

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Used to be stairway to bed:Now stairway to the sky

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fayswon · #2 (**permalink**) 02-06-2008, 06:56

gorgeous colors, gorgeous light. the focus on the bottom is too soft for my taste. Who would guess that rubble could be so beautiful?

Mausue · #3 (**permalink**) 02-06-2008, 07:17

Good composition. Lovely colours and tones. The fact that it's oof seems to add to the derelict feel. The house used to be a home and had life (was in focus) but now it's derelict and the life it once had has gone(out of focus). Great capture Len

Len · #4 (**permalink**) 02-06-2008, 07:49

Hi Fay and Maureen

Thanks for looking and your comments

Lenita · #5 (**permalink**) 03-06-2008, 00:15

I agree with Maureen - composition, tones, colours and lighting are just perfect for this photo .... I do find the focus too soft for my liking though - I would like to gaze at it for a while, but find the 'blurriness' too distracting - great subject, though!

Len · #6 (**permalink**) 03-06-2008, 12:28

Hi Lenita

Thanks for looking and your comments