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Old 25-05-2008, 16:47
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Took this shot just over a week ago on my way home from work, I think that was our summer. This field has now turned green so I must have taken it just at its peak. I thought that it would make a nice simple image.




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It is indeed a very nice simple picture but if I dare say it a little over saturated for me.
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Old 25-05-2008, 16:59
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It is indeed a very nice simple picture but if I dare say it a little over saturated for me.
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Hi Bryan, you could be right there as this was taken on my compact camera and have just taken it through photoshop to remove some birds that where flying through which I did not notched at the time, whilst in PS I did play with the levels and saturation which as you say I may have taken a bit too far. I welcome any advise like this.
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You could try leaving the blue as it is and just lower the green and yellow.
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Hi Barry

It's a lot better than the one I did: Nice shot
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Perfect use of the "rule of thirds" Barry, it really makes for a good composition. I also like the simplicity of the shot. I don't think it's oversaturated at all, infact it is a really good representation of the colour of Canola flowers.....(I have painted enough landscapes of Canola fields to know that) LOL
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Reminds me of the velvia days mate. Its rich but not overpowering for me.
It really leaps out at you.

Composition is a pleaser. Another nice one to add to your gallery.

I know there was a spell when I would not shut up about panoramics but this would be a prime candidate.
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It's a lot better than the one I did: Nice shot
Glad that you liked it, I think having the sun shining made all the difference, plus not having any land in the background helped this image as well.
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Perfect use of the "rule of thirds" Barry, it really makes for a good composition.
Well with it being so simple, I thought that I had better stick to the thirds thing, else you lot would be getting at me
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Composition is a pleaser. Another nice one to add to your gallery.
Thanks for your comment, I will get it printed and see how it looks in print.
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