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11-05-2008, 06:38 PM
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Essex, England
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Join Date: May 2008
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Alex at 17 weeks
Photographers Comments
This is my cat when he was 17 weeks. He would follow me around the house whenever I had my camera to hand, wanting me to take his picture.
Serious Critique Required: The photographer has requested he/she would like a more serious level of critique for this image to obtain more constructive critiscism from other members. Please make sure the comments you leave are indeed constructive and aim to help the photographer see the image from a different perspective and/or provide help and guidance to how the image can be improved.
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Primary Camera: Canon,
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12-05-2008, 04:58 PM
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My real name is: Phil
Flintshire, Wales
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Join Date: Nov 2007
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A nice image of your cat with a good conversion to B/W. However I feel that the focus would have been more beneficial on the eyes and not the paw, a smaller DoF of around f8. would have allowed this to be a successful image
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Regards....Phil
If it moves shoot it. If it doesn't move, still shoot it.
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Yesterday, 08:17 PM
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Cornwall, England
PhotoTopix Master
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Join Date: Nov 2007
Buyer/Seller Rating: 100% (1)
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I have to agree with Phil, eyes would have been my first choice of focus.
The conversion is good with ample range but the image as a whole does not leap out at me. I think the paw is a distraction and not helping the image because there is no forearm, just paw.
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Yesterday, 09:53 PM
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My real name is: Fay
Canada, Outside of the UK
PhotoTopix Master
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Join Date: Dec 2007
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looks like one of those celebrity shots where they have the hand pushed up to the camera. In even taming feral cats, I find that they are much more comfortable when I'm playing with the camera..they really are curious.
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Primary Camera: Canon,
Camera Skill: Intermediate ,
Photoshop Skill: Intermediate,
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