[PP] rushing water B/white

Photographers Comments
taken in devon using lumix Fz5 my first digital camera hope to get some comments on it like where im going wrong if at all




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This image was specifically created for a Personal Project created by our project randomiser. This photo was created using the following randomly chosen criteria:

Theme: Rocks [F]
Light: Natural Light
Focal Distance: 105mm-200mm
Location: Outdoors (Day)
Colour Type: Black and White