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Old 23-04-2008, 05:42
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When the tide is out .. u can walk a fair distance out on the sand ..
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It looks much better if you rotate 0.7 deg clockwise as the horizon isn't straight. Great cloudscape, it's the real strength of the shot. You could have dodged the midtones and dark areas of the cloud to give it a bit more bite. Nice shot.
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Hi Rob ..Thanks for that ... I had thought that I did have it straight .. but when I looked at it in here .. ooops .. lol .. it does have a bit of a list ...lol ... I appreciate your help .. !!
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Well now It should be straight .. I hope ... lol ..
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