Egypt nile falucca

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sunset on the nile




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Hi Tony. I love the color and placement of the boat. The only thing I would suggest is to straighten the horizon and crop a little off the bottom. Art

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A day without sunshine is like, well,...nite.

A cracker of a shot with all the right elements. As Art says the water line needs to be straightened just a little (it probably is due to the line of the river bank but we only see what is in the frame ). Water -v- sky, again I'm with Art, crop away either most of the water or most of the sky and there is your image ..... just my $0.02

Tony, next time you visit can I carry your bags?

Dave.

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Hmmmmm, sometimes I just wonder if it isn't my life which is slightly out of focus
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