Starlings Feeding

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Trevor, i take my hat off to you. Anyone who can catch a wild bird in any shot has my admiration. It would have been nice to have had more frame on the right would be my only comment however i fully recognise that you cant fram a shot like this one and that may have not been possible. You could actually resize the canvas by a few pixels and then copy the edges and clone out any of the bird that gets copied to match the background. Then crop the same amount off the left to retain the size. Good shot.

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Denny Boy

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Very quick and crude effort trevor (just to show what i mean took 2 mins so didnt take much care)

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Denny Boy

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Thanks Dennis, I will try that method in future, never tried that before.

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Trevor

Camera: Pentax K10D
Lens: Pentax 18-55mm f3,5-5.6AL, Sigma 70-300mm f4-5.6 DG Macro.
Tripod: Velbon CX-440

Hi Trevor .. a good capture .. of the bird coming in for a landing.. lol . and no u can't get them exactly where u want them in a photo. I see what Dennis has done .. and see that it does help ..
Cheers
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