Marshall Road3

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Taken along Marshall Road in the outer suburbs of Perth.




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I do like this image! The leading lines from the tire tracks help draw the eye to the tree stumps. From my point of few, I would have moved slightly to the left to bring the tire tracks more central to the image, though, but then again, they do actually work with the angle of the image. LOL, I really do confuse myself at times!

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I like this shot. I feel that the placement of the tire tracks works well comeing out of the corner of the picture and leading your eyes in. It ofsets the trees beeing centered and complements them. I also like the way the clouds seem to continue lines made by the tracks. Great job! Art

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I agree with everyone, even mixed up Mark...lol, I think. I have one pik and the is the upper portion; the blue is so strong. The strong, darkness keeps pushing the eye down, which is good because the eye doesn't go straight up the tree and out of the image. I think I would like it if it was just a little gentler.