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Old 23-03-2008, 06:39 PM
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The wind was a bit rough today & was blowing these things around making them hard to capture. Just wish it had been facing me.




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This is another stunner Charlie, I cant find anything to critise....good DOF excellent clarity giving stunning detail. I like the diagonals you have formed too. Just a pity that the branch is broken at the end as I feel that if it had carried on out of the shot the lines would be complete.

Your hide is really paying you dividends!!!!!

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Thanks for the comment. I do hope folks are enjoying sharing these with me. You are of course right about the branch. Wish I hadnt made it so short now!! Sometime I will put on a pic of the setup outside the hide & others can suggest ways in which I can improve on it.
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nice shot. you've captured him brilliantly, well done
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Hi Charlie .. you can see that it had to be windy with the feathers being ruffled .. nice catchlight in the birds eye .. and you could try to clone in the branch .. it does take time to do it ... Thanks for sharing . and I am enjoying seeing all the different birds that you are able to capture with your camera .. The photo are really wonderful.
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Hi Charlie .. you can see that it had to be windy with the feathers being ruffled .. nice catchlight in the birds eye .. and you could try to clone in the branch .. it does take time to do it ... Thanks for sharing . and I am enjoying seeing all the different birds that you are able to capture with your camera .. The photo are really wonderful.
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Thank you. I am glad you get some pleasure out of them. That to me is what photography is all about.
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