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Old 23-03-2008, 12:56 PM
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This Swan must have been an escapee it was with about a dozen Mute Swans, Tweeked slightly in levels & Hue & Saturation




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nice shot Trevor, i can see the light on the beak was a problem for you.
i saw one of these recently in pembrokshire, also with other mute swans. they didn't seem to like him much. i hear black swans are common in australia.
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Good shot Trevor, may I say it's your best swan shot so far!!!
I would have liked to have seen a bit more background above his head but thats my personnal preference.
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Hi Trevor .. sometimes if you use the clone stamp on the beak and only have it set for about .. 25 % or so .. you can work it in .. so there wouldn't be the blown out white on the beak .. it takes a little time and fiddling about .. There is lots of the black swans in Australia .. I have been there a few times and seen lots of them there ...
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