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Old 18-03-2008, 08:04 PM
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A waterfall i found on the way home from work.




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Slow s/s works well,how ever the blade of grass on the left hand side distracts the eye for me. norman
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This is very interesting. I like the capture of the water, like a fantasy. Then the grass is so clear and detailed bringing you back to reality. Your composition is good to. It is balanced between the grasses, but focused on the waterfall.
One bright white spot in the centre I find distracting. I believe only photo editing can correct that, nothing you could have done when taking the shot, unless you moved around to see if the light on that spot changed.
Best part of this photo is the contrast between the soft water and the detailed grass making it very interesting to look at.
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