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15-03-2008, 11:13 PM
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My real name is: Else
BC Canada, Outside of the UK
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The Long White Fence edited
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Not sure if it is straight .. and not sure if I managed to take the blown out clouds ... down a bit ... also I did crop a bit of the sky out ... think it will take another time to work on it .. but the best I could do right now ..
Cheers
Else
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16-03-2008, 05:05 AM
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Cornwall, England
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I think the exposure is good and the blown bits on the clouds don't bother me too much. Its a nice shot perspective wise Else. But it seems a bit out of balance top to bottom. At first I thought it was top heavy, but with that fabulous sky I think its more the case of being bottom light. Maybe more image at the bottom would even it up depending of course what was in the foreground.
Nice lead in lines and overall a very pleasing image to the eye.
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16-03-2008, 11:29 AM
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My real name is: Andy aka Brad Pitt
Southampton, England
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Much better Else. this is really pleasing to the eye. the sky looks great and it doesnt bother me too much about the blown clouds. Have to disagree with The Corporate Officer though (for a change) as i like the balance between sky and ground...the sky can handle the large expanse of the shot.
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16-03-2008, 10:59 PM
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My real name is: Else
BC Canada, Outside of the UK
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Hi Tco and Andy ... Well . u all might get sick and tired of looking at more or less the same photo .. I did take another photo of this but less sky in the shot. Thank you for the comments, quite happy with this. . but think I will still try to work on the blown out clouds ...
Cheers
Else
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