 |

14-03-2008, 04:06
|
 |
My real name is: Else
BC Canada, Outside of the UK
PhotoTopix Master
|
|
Join Date: Dec 2007
Buyer/Seller Classified Rating: 0% (0)
|
|
|
The Long White Fence
Photographers Comments
We were out again along the road with the Long White Frence .. I had Fred stop so I could take photos of it, without flying by at 80 K an hour .. lol ... I only stopped long enough to take two photos. Will post the other one later ..
Cheers
Else
Serious Critique Required: The photographer has requested he/she would like a more serious level of critique for this image to obtain more constructive critiscism from other members. Please make sure the comments you leave are indeed constructive and aim to help the photographer see the image from a different perspective and/or provide help and guidance to how the image can be improved.
|
|
Primary Camera: Canon,
Camera Skill: Beginner ,
Photoshop Skill: Beginner,
Edit My Photos: Ask me first
|
|
My Main Interests:
Food
, Landscape
, Macro
, Travel
|

14-03-2008, 08:55
|
 |
Tasmania, Outside of the UK
PhotoTopix Contributor
|
|
Join Date: Dec 2007
Buyer/Seller Classified Rating: 0% (0)
|
|
|
well I like the whole picture Else, what a fence!!!! and it looks like they have a lovely red barn at the end of it, great sky, an all over great shot...Josie
|
|
Primary Camera: Panasonic,
Camera Skill: Intermediate ,
Photoshop Skill: Intermediate,
Edit My Photos: Ask me first
|
|
My Main Interests:
Animals
, Black & White
, Landscape
, Location
, Macro
, Nature
|

14-03-2008, 09:40
|
 |
My real name is: Andy aka Brad Pitt
Southampton, England
Good Looking Moderator
|
|
Join Date: Nov 2007
Buyer/Seller Classified Rating: 0% (0)
|
|
|
great shot and glad you actually stopped this time!
I would say that the fence on the RHS should really be positioned the same distance from the bottom as the LHS to balance it better
__________________
The summer is here and the time is right,
We're going racing in the street....Bruce Springsteen
Canon Forever
1Dmk2,10D, 20mm,28-70mm,200mm, Elinchrom3000,1500,600's,500's, Multiblitz200,Bronica SQb, expensive Manfrotto tripod
|
|
Primary Camera: Canon,
Camera Skill: Advanced ,
Photoshop Skill: Advanced,
Edit My Photos: Yes
|
|
My Main Interests:
Black & White
, Landscape
, Portrait
, Stock
, Wedding
|

14-03-2008, 09:53
|
 |
My real name is: Diane
Cape Town, South Africa, Outside of the UK
PhotoTopix Contributor
|
|
Join Date: Dec 2007
Buyer/Seller Classified Rating: 0% (0)
|
|
|
Hi Else, same comment as Andy. I also find the bottom RHS unbalanced, it looks like it's running up hill where the LHS is going down.
It certainly is a stunning place, I'm also glad that you got to stop and I'm looking forward to seeing more 
__________________
"Carpe Diem"........Life is too short to dance with ugly men
|
|
Primary Camera: Fuji,
Camera Skill: Intermediate ,
Photoshop Skill: Intermediate,
Edit My Photos: Yes
|
|
My Main Interests:
Black & White
, Fine Art
, Landscape
, Location
, Macro
, Nature
|

14-03-2008, 13:31
|
 |
My real name is: Barry
Near Brecon, Wales
Super Moderator
|
|
Join Date: Oct 2007
Buyer/Seller Classified Rating: 0% (0)
|
|
|
Hi Else, That white fence is great against the green background and you were lucky with those clouds. A nice image.
|
|
Primary Camera: Nikon,
Camera Skill: Intermediate ,
Photoshop Skill: Intermediate,
Edit My Photos: Yes
|
|
My Main Interests:
Black & White
, Infrared
, Landscape
, Macro
|

14-03-2008, 16:18
|
 |
My real name is: Fay
Canada, Outside of the UK
PhotoTopix Master
|
|
Join Date: Dec 2007
Buyer/Seller Classified Rating: 0% (0)
|
|
|
The clouds and the fence really add some riveting depth. Some of the clouds on the left 1/2 way up have the detail blown out. This does look like a shot that was exposure demanding. Like how you brought out the 2 tones of greens in the grass.
|
|
Primary Camera: Canon,
Camera Skill: Intermediate ,
Photoshop Skill: Intermediate,
Edit My Photos: Ask me first
|
|
My Main Interests:
Macro
, Nature
, Portrait
, Stock
|

14-03-2008, 16:36
|
 |
My real name is: Paul
New York State USA, Outside of the UK
PhotoTopix Active Member
|
|
Join Date: Feb 2008
Buyer/Seller Classified Rating: 0% (0)
|
|
|
I'm glad you stopped.I like how the fence leads the eye. Perhaps too much sky?
__________________
Nikon D8o Nikkor 18-135 f/3.5-5.6G IF-ED Nikkor 70-300 f/4.5-5.6G IF-ED VR Hoya circular polarizer
|
|
Primary Camera: Nikon,
Camera Skill: Intermediate ,
Photoshop Skill: Intermediate,
Edit My Photos: Yes
|
|
My Main Interests:
Architecture
, Cityscape
, Landscape
, Macro
, Nature
, Night
, Travel
|

15-03-2008, 23:05
|
 |
My real name is: Else
BC Canada, Outside of the UK
PhotoTopix Master
|
|
Join Date: Dec 2007
Buyer/Seller Classified Rating: 0% (0)
|
|
|
Hi Josie ... Thanks for stopping by to see the long white fence ... and leaving a comment ..
Hi Andy .. funny how I didn't even think of looking at that before I posted it .. but have been doing an edit .. will post it soon.
Hi Diane, Yes I think it looks like a lovely home .. but didn't want to spend too much time parked there and taking photos .. never know if they thought that I might be casing the place ..lol ..
Hi Fay ... thank you for pointing that out the clouds being blown out .. I really didn't notice that at all .. helps when there is more then one set of eyes looking at the photo .. things really do get missed.
Hi Paul ... going to posted the edited version .. . on a new page .. I have cropped it a bit as well.. ..
Thank you everyone for stopping by and helping me along the way .. It is appreciated!!
Cheers
Else
__________________
© "Whatt I See"
"Everything has it's beauty, but not everyone sees it"
Confucius
|
|
Primary Camera: Canon,
Camera Skill: Beginner ,
Photoshop Skill: Beginner,
Edit My Photos: Ask me first
|
|
My Main Interests:
Food
, Landscape
, Macro
, Travel
|
| Thread Tools |
|
|
| Display Modes |
Linear Mode
|
Posting Rules
|
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
HTML code is Off
|
|
|



|
|