All washed up

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Taken on the beach at Freshwater Bay, Isle of Wight.




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Hi Annette, Like this one as well, you take nice pictures. This one looks simple then you look at the water and motion and the lighting and its not so simple. Wish i could take nice pictures like this. You can almost see the sand drying out as your eyes work down the picture. Like it and i wouldnt change nothing!!!

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Gorgeous water and sand. I'm finding that the stick is really pulling my eye away from the water. The stick guides the eye towards the water but the eye doesn't rest easy on the water; it keeps pulling back to the rather underexposed stick. I feel like a lower perspective may have been better; there is almost a half composition. Just another persons opinion.