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04-03-2008, 05:43
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My real name is: Rex
Port Vila, Vanuatu, Outside of the UK
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Havana Harbour, Vanuatu
Photographers Comments
A view along the beach at Havana Harbour, near Port Vila, Vanuatu
Serious Critique Required: The photographer has requested he/she would like a more serious level of critique for this image to obtain more constructive critiscism from other members. Please make sure the comments you leave are indeed constructive and aim to help the photographer see the image from a different perspective and/or provide help and guidance to how the image can be improved.
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Primary Camera: Canon,
Camera Skill: None ,
Photoshop Skill: Intermediate,
Edit My Photos: Yes
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My Main Interests:
Black & White
, Fine Art
, Landscape
, Macro
, Nature
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05-03-2008, 01:12
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My real name is: Fay
Canada, Outside of the UK
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this image really catches the attention...strong contrasts of the blues and white clouds...like the splashes of crimson amongst the leaves...nice curving of the beach..I feel like I want the whole thing lightened up..the foreground anyways
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Primary Camera: Canon,
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Photoshop Skill: Intermediate,
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05-03-2008, 01:55
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My real name is: Rex
Port Vila, Vanuatu, Outside of the UK
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Hi Fay, maybe I did darken it a bit too much. I wanted to draw the eye along the beach to the figure. I will play around a bit more. Thanks for the crit.
Cheers Rex
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Primary Camera: Canon,
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Photoshop Skill: Intermediate,
Edit My Photos: Yes
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My Main Interests:
Black & White
, Fine Art
, Landscape
, Macro
, Nature
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05-03-2008, 19:28
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Cornwall, England
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Looking at the thumbnail it really stood out mate. Composition is perfect.
Exposure is good, as is the sky. Only crit would be to maybe lighten sand a little.
Lovely work buddy..cracking shot.
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Primary Camera: Canon,
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Animals
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05-03-2008, 20:40
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My real name is: Rex
Port Vila, Vanuatu, Outside of the UK
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Join Date: Dec 2007
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Hi Tco, I see you agree with Fay about the sand. I will play around a bit more and see what I can come up with. Thanks for taking the time to look and comment.
Cheers Rex
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Primary Camera: Canon,
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Photoshop Skill: Intermediate,
Edit My Photos: Yes
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My Main Interests:
Black & White
, Fine Art
, Landscape
, Macro
, Nature
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06-03-2008, 06:38
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Australia, Outside of the UK
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Good punchy colours Rex, and I like the comp. as well..... As TC has memtioned maybe a little lightening of the sands, but especially the ocean just to give that clear water look. The tree and the clouds are especially interesting.
Cheers,
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Primary Camera: Hasselblad,
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Commercial
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06-03-2008, 20:53
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My real name is: Rex
Port Vila, Vanuatu, Outside of the UK
PhotoTopix Contributor
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Join Date: Dec 2007
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Thanks Joseph. I will do a bit more. Where are you in Aus? I usually go there for R&R, mostly Sydney or Brisbane.
Cheers Rex
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Primary Camera: Canon,
Camera Skill: None ,
Photoshop Skill: Intermediate,
Edit My Photos: Yes
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My Main Interests:
Black & White
, Fine Art
, Landscape
, Macro
, Nature
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