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Old 14-10-2008, 19:47
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one of my favorite little birds been trying to get a good shot for two years got soaking wet it long grass but my best efort yet cheers dave

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Old 14-10-2008, 20:54
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It is a great shot Dave. beautiful lighting, exposure spot on, plenty of detail, blimey you've even got a catch light in the eye only little thing for me is that there is a lot of space around the little fella. Could you crop a little tighter perhaps?
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Old 14-10-2008, 21:52
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Not a serious critique--but I really like it. A tighter crop would be my only suggestion.
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Old 14-10-2008, 23:34
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thanks guys for your advice much welcomed
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Old 15-10-2008, 03:42
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Well .. I think it was well worth you getting soaked ... U must be very happy with this .. It's a beauty ...
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Old 15-10-2008, 08:07
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My only slight crit would be the crop too - otherwise this is a completely stunning image - well done!
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Old 15-10-2008, 10:03
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Lovely capture. Exposure, composition, detail all spot on. I actually like the space around him
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