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08-08-2008, 10:44
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England
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[PP] QE2 Bridge Dartford
Photographers Comments
Looking up river towards the QE2 Bridge at Dartford on a very gloomy evening
Serious Critique Required: The photographer has requested he/she would like a more serious level of critique for this image to obtain more constructive critiscism from other members. Please make sure the comments you leave are indeed constructive and aim to help the photographer see the image from a different perspective and/or provide help and guidance to how the image can be improved.
This image was specifically created for a Personal Project created by our project randomiser. This photo was created using the following randomly chosen criteria:
Theme: Bridge [F]
Light: Other Light Source (Non flash or Natural)
Focal Distance: 70-105mm [F]
Location: Outdoors (Day) [F]
Colour Type: Colour [F]
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08-08-2008, 12:27
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My real name is: Dennis (DP-J)
West Bromwich, England
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Hi Steve, you asked for serious crit so here goes (my opinion i know) the image first then the PP results! I like the image, Nice sky, foreshore adds interest and the reflections on the water are great, overall nice moody image. Second the PP, Bridge yes, Natural light yes, focal length 28mm project says 70-105mm, Outdoors yes, Colour yes, so my only point would be and i have fell for this myself Once! is watch the criteria, if you used 70mm+ you wouldnt have got the wide angle. I fully appreciate it is difficult on a no SLR camera to gauge the focal length as well. Overall though mate nice image. Lets see some more. 
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09-08-2008, 21:45
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My real name is: Paul
Lennoxtown, Scotland
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I agree with DB here. Its a great image. I like the crop, the colour in the sky is really nice, and the composition works well. The foreground is maybe a tad to dark, but overall it works.
Unfortunately, from the PP point of view is doesnt fit the brief, but hey, rules are always meant to be broken! 
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11-08-2008, 11:26
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England
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Whoops sorry about that you are quite right.I just wasn't thinking properly. Anyway many thanks for your constructive and honest oppinion it all helps. Now I'm gonna give the same shot a go with my D80.
Thanks guys
Steve
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