Another Lily from back garden

G8PSR · #1 (**permalink**) 05-08-2008, 21:42

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Another Lily from my back garden, I like the colours in this and have faded the stem out as some have you have suggested from previous posts.

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**Ogofmole** · #2 (**permalink**) 06-08-2008, 16:56

Hi Paul, Yet another fine flower head, looks nice and sharp with good colours, I do like these dark backgrounds as it keeps your eye focussed on the main subject. I do prefer the faded stem, only small crit with this one is that green leaf poking out from under that petal on right, I think that I would have cloned that out.

G8PSR · #3 (**permalink**) 19-10-2008, 09:21

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Originally Posted by Ogofmole

Hi Paul, Yet another fine flower head, looks nice and sharp with good colours, I do like these dark backgrounds as it keeps your eye focussed on the main subject. I do prefer the faded stem, only small crit with this one is that green leaf poking out from under that petal on right, I think that I would have cloned that out.

Hi Barry,
Thanks for looking and for the kind comments much appreciated.
Now that you pointed out about the green leaf on the right, I see what you mean, I will clone out.
All the best Paul