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Old 23-07-2008, 10:19 AM
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this is a single flower that I managed to grow from a piece taken from a carnation spray that I bought



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Old 23-07-2008, 10:40 AM
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John,
I hope that you dont mind, here are a couple of poor efforts from me ...
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hey pete of course i dont mind ,thats why i put them up so that others might show me how to do things
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just wonder if you like this one any better Pete
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John, deff the best yet, the detail in the petals is now nice and visible & the border suits the colour.
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I thought so too Pete, so thanks again
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I like this last one best......but....the frame has gotta go. It's my opinion that it overpowers the detailing of the carnation.
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Have to agree with Fay here not sure about that border, a little too much i think which takes the enphisus away from the flower..but definately better that the first.
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I have removed the border,What do you think now Fay & Bev
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Much better John! if you want to add borders try and keep them simple, just so they emphasize the subject in the frame, hope you dont mind but i have done a copy of the carnation using a small black outline frame just for your thoughts.

Everyone has different tastes on borders and frames John so its just trying to find the one that compliments the subject and doesnt look too vibrant.
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