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28-06-2008, 08:49 PM
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My real name is: Peter
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Red Angel 1
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From the childrens gala today. This is a stilt performer. I liked the lighting on the red outfit but the background was not good, so I decided to go for black for a bit of drama!
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28-06-2008, 09:02 PM
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No critique but just to say that the black background works really well
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28-06-2008, 09:04 PM
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My real name is: Peter
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Thanks John, I am not too up on processing skills so this was an interesting learning curve for me!
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28-06-2008, 09:07 PM
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Not really able to give serious critique, but i like this one.
Works well for me.
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28-06-2008, 09:57 PM
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Thanks for the comment Mike.
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28-06-2008, 10:13 PM
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My real name is: Dennis-AKA The Villa(n)
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Pete, love it but find the red border distracting, when you view 800px it makes the image seem smaller when you border it, other than that brillo!
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28-06-2008, 11:02 PM
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Thanks Denny, I decided to border it because the wings straddle the whole frame. I'll try one without but I expect it will work either way depending on personal preference.
Cheers, Peter
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29-06-2008, 06:41 AM
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Good call on the black background, mate, works really well!! As for the border, try using a thinner one, that might work both ways too 
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29-06-2008, 07:56 AM
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Hi Mark, you are right I suspect, the border would be better thinner. Thanks for the suggestion.
Cheers, Peter
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29-06-2008, 10:19 AM
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Fabulous, very striking shot..first glance i thought the BG was black until i read your comments! nice work
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