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Old 18-06-2008, 02:59 PM
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Took another 3 shots 0 comp +1 comp and -1 comp then used my HDR program, really starting to like the HDR thing now, produces some really cool effects




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Cool shot mate, have you cropped it? i would have allowed a bit more room at the front if not the back as well, it looks squeezed into the frame if you know what i mean. Barry taught me early on to leave a bit round the subject if possible when composing the shot. You have actually not left enough room to get a feeler gauge in front or back!! Nice wheels though, lovely colour.
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"Feeler Gauge" Technical stuff this photography

Nice shot;like the effect
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Nice shot;like the effect
Cant take the engineer out of me Len!!! I am a Qualified Diesel Engineer although i drive a desk now. Could have said cant get a "fag paper" in if you prefer!
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good advice about the framing, that is the photo uncropped, so mental note to me, get more around the subject matter :-)
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good advice about the framing, that is the photo uncropped, so mental note to me, get more around the subject matter :-)
No probs, baz told me you should leave room round and if your subject is pointing one way let a bit of room so it has somewhere to point if this makes sense!
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