Honda Gold Wing

Photographers Comments
Day out at Goathland




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Lovely bike! I could almost trade in my cruiser for that! I feel it's a little busy in the background though, a narrower depth of field to blur it more would have helped make it recede. It's also a little 'static'. Unless the bike is moving and you pan with it, it's difficult to get a decent shot of a bike from the side like that so you end up with just a basic record shot. Moving round the front a little and taking the picture at a slight angle would have made it a little more dynamic perhaps?

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Marie

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Thanks Marie

There was about 20-30 bikes all stood ready to set off so I just snapped a few as they waited.